The table illustrates the projected costings during the five years in American dollars for three environmental strategies for stable forestry, whilst the pie chart presents the anticipated expenses distributed by four sectors in the first year.

The table illustrates the projected costings during the five years in American dollars for three environmental strategies for stable forestry, whilst the pie chart presents the anticipated expenses distributed by four sectors in the first year.
The given table and pie chart illustrate the data of projection cost every
year
for environmental project development in the next five years in three different continents (West Africa, Central America and
South-East
Asia
) and the prediction of expenses proportion every
year
. The units are measured in millions and per cent.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that
South-East
Asia
will have the biggest
budget
for the project in all five years.
Moreover
, half of the expenditure will used for salaries. As the table shows, in the initial
year
South-East
Asia
almost tripled its
budget
compared with West Africa at 10.5
million
,
whereas
Central America budgeted at 20
million
.
Moreover
,
South-East
Asia
has the biggest cost throughout the given period and the
budget
increasing
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every
year
with 50
million
in the
last
period. Meanwhile,
in
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Africa and Central America will encounter a reduction in
budget
and
at the end
of the period cost 3.5
million
and 5
million
, respectively. Regarding the proportion of expenditure, half of the allocation will be used for salaries. In the second position, 30% will be expense for set-up costs.
Lastly
, training and office expenses will be used at 10% each.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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