A friend of yours is going on holiday soon and has asked you to recommend a destination. Write a letter to your friend and recommend a good place for a holiday that you have visited before.Say where you went, where you stayed, what you can do there and what the food was like.

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Hey joe, I hope you are doing well. I got your mail that you are planning a holiday soon, I would recommend you to go

New

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York

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as I went there

last

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summer with my parents. As you are living in Montreal, New

York

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is just 6

hours

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6-hour

drive from there. You should go

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car, as it will be convenient for you to travel between your hotel and

subway

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the subway

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station. You should book your hotel in New Jersey; it will be much cheaper

instead

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of booking

expensive

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hotel in New

York

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. Once reaching New

York

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, you should only travel by subway as there will be a lot of traffic in

NYC

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, which will kill

your

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you

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most of the time. You should visit

Statue

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the Statue

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of Liberty and

Time

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Times

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Square without a second thought, these are the main tourist attractions in

NYC

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and they are so elegant. In

NYC

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you will have

lot

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of options for eating. I would suggest you

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apply

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eat the Dollar pizza. You will find those on every other street in

NYC

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, and

also

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, they are very good in taste. I

wish

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hope

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you

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have the best trip and don’t hesitate to call me if you have any questions. Best Regards, Dhruvil

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that the letter follows a clear logical structure, with each paragraph focusing on a distinct topic, such as the recommendation of the destination, accommodation advice, travel tips, and food suggestions.

coherence cohesion

Use appropriate greetings and closings for a semi-formal letter, avoiding overly casual language such as 'Hey' and opting for a more appropriate closing instead of 'Best Regards', to match the context of the task.

task achievement

Include more specific experiences and descriptive details about the destination to enhance the task response. Mention particular places to stay, activities to enjoy, and types of food to try, as well as why you recommend them based on your personal experience.

task achievement

Adopt a semi-formal tone throughout the letter, suitable for writing to a friend while still maintaining a certain level of formality to address the task appropriately.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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amenities
local cuisine
adventure sports
historical sites
memorable experience
quaint
authentic
scenic views
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