Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is commonly known that we are living in a modern world where technology and the internet are better than before. We can find useful information and ask for advice so
people
will have many options for their choices
. Moreover
, I strongly believe that people
have more than one choice. There are many reasons which contribute to why our lives have many choices
.
Firstly
, as for the academic environment and social aspects, we can think about careers and choose the job we would like to do when we are leaving from University. For instance
, teenagers can look for a study at their favorite
university or college so they can choose majors that are suitable for them. Change the spelling
favourite
Secondly
, we can decide who is your friend. For example
, when you make friends with a person who takes advantage of your kindness, you will choose not to become their best friend. Instead
of making bad friends, you can choose other people
who respect you and their relationship. Lastly
, Life is a lesson in making mistakes and learning. For example
, if you fail college which is the school you really like it doesn’t mean you don’t have the opportunity to study at other universities. Additionally
, you can choose another form of study such
as vocational or training to continue your studies for your future career.
What’s more, regarding digital life, our society's technological innovations may have the most immediate benefits for public-sector industries like business, education, food, transportation, and entertainment. They have been providing us with an enormous array of choices
for various amenities in public buildings. For example
, parks are increasingly places where people
congregate with friends and family in addition
to being leisurely places to stroll. Additionally
, they give residents access to a variety of basic exercise equipment, and vending machines are sporadically positioned to help with issues like hunger and dehydration. The healthcare industry is one instance that demonstrates how advancements could provide individuals with a multitude of options to choose from. Regards to several creations and inventions.
In short, we don’t always have many choices
in the bad case but I still believe that in modern life we will have many options to choose for our future. Each choice will bring you different benefits, so you need to research carefully before making a decision for yourself.Submitted by jakelong16091994 on
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