The graph belows show the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, train or bus between 1970 and 2030.

The graph belows show the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, train or bus between 1970 and 2030.
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The line graph depicts the medium passengers of The UK every single day including car, train, and bus 60 year period of time from 1970 and 2030. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that the figures to increase in commuters travelling were car and train,
on the other hand
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, bus was the only data to decrease over the period given.
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the graph, cars stood at just under 6
million
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which
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it was still the same place as it started until 1980, climbed considerably and it is expected that the number will peak at exactly 9
million
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commuters in the final year.
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, trains began from slightly under 3
million
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and reached approximately 5
million
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except for a stabilize between 2010 and 2020. As for remaining, buses initiated from around 4
million
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in the beginning which after it remained unchanged over the next 10 years, it declined
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replaced by train and finished the line at precisely 3 which was the lowest number compared to others in the
last
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year surveyed.
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