What are the advantages and disadvantages of using CCTV cameras to fight crime?
Nowadays, the use of
CCTV
cameras has increased dramatically in order to make places more secure.
They can easily be witnessed eveywhere
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everywhere
such
as banks, offices and even supermarkets. There are some beneficial points such
as lessening the
crime and making streets safer, Correct article usage
apply
however
, some disadvantages are included as well. In this
essay, I will explore the pros and cons of using CCTV
cameras and try to draw some conclusions.
Firstly
, one of the major benefits of using this
type of cameras
is that it helps to decrease the number of crimes. Yet, it records the events on a daily basis and Fix the agreement mistake
camera
less
people dare to Change the quantifier
fewer
commite
a crime in front of them. Correct your spelling
commit
For instance
, In 2004, a group of thiefs
broke into Correct your spelling
thieves
a
Change the article
an
appartement
to do Correct your spelling
apartment
robbery
, but as soon they realized the Correct article usage
a robbery
CCTV
, they started to ran
. Change the verb
run
Secondly
, another major plus points
of them is that they make streets become safer. What I mean by Fix the agreement mistake
point
this
is it recogonizes
the Correct your spelling
recognises
the
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apply
cars
speed and if someone breaks the law, the information Change noun form
car's
of
that car will be sent to Change preposition
about
police
station by them which costs the driver a lot. Add an article
the police
a police
In addition
, lots of accidents have prevented
from happening.
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been prevented
On the other hand
, on
of the main drawbacks can be the price of these evidence recorders which is significantly expensive. Correct your spelling
one
For example
, the high quality
ones are about 4000$ and later. But, in spite of the high price, they are bought by people. Another major disadvantage of them is that most of them are connected to Add a hyphen
high-quality
PC
via wire. So, if the lights go out, they will stop working and the recordings will be deleted. In Correct article usage
a PC
US
, a bank robbery Correct article usage
the US
was happened
when the lights had gone out and the police could not find any evidence.
In conclusion, there are some Change to the active voice
happened
has happened
positives
and Fix the agreement mistake
positive
negatives
points of using Change the noun form
negative
CCTV
. Personally, I believe the advantages outwigh
any disadvantages.Correct your spelling
outweigh
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Address all parts of the task in your response. For this essay, discuss both the advantages and disadvantages thoroughly, ensuring that you cover all aspects of the CCTV's role in fighting crime. It is also crucial to make sure your position is clear throughout the essay.