15/1 The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time.
These
two
maps illustrate the differences at Use synonyms
this
school.between 1985 Linking Words
to
current time.
Correct word choice
and to
Overall
, the pictures Linking Words
reveals
there are more classrooms and facilities for students Change the verb form
reveal
in
Change preposition
at
current
time, and compared with in the past, the area of playing Correct article usage
the current
fileds
has shrunk to half.
Correct your spelling
fields
Firstly
, there were 1,500 people in 1985 and the number surged to 2,300 over the period. Because Linking Words
of
the student population had a significant increase,
the school built more constructions to suit students' Change preposition
apply
demand
. Fix the agreement mistake
demands
For example
, there were Linking Words
two
buildings which were used for Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the classroom
classroom
, and one of them was Fix the agreement mistake
classrooms
two
storeys, Use synonyms
in contrast
, it has three constructions now, one has three storeys and Linking Words
two
new Use synonyms
construcions
which the sizes are larger than in the past.
In order to build these facilities, about half of the playing Correct your spelling
constructions
construction
fileds
Correct your spelling
fields
are
used for building a pool and a fitness centre, and the car parking track Wrong verb form
were
also
disappeared during the Linking Words
rebuilt
.Replace the word
rebuild
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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