The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The figure describes the approximate changes of three different kinds of metals throughout the

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2014. At the beginning of 2014, the

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of

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was the highest among the others, whilst the

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of

zinc

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was the lowest.

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of the

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, the

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of

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was becoming the lowest

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and the

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of

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elevated,

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highest

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compared to others. The

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of copper

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quite stable

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January

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2014 to the

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of 2014. A moderate drop happened starting from

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to May by 2%.

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,

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did not change until June 2014.

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, a significant

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to 1%

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in July and

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a plateau appeared throughout July to September 2014.

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, there was a slight

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in October and November 2014 about 0,2%.

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, a moderate increase happened

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of the

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as it increased to 2%.

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, the

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of

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had a dramatic fluctuation during 2014. Starting from

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to March 2014, the

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of

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dramatically boomed to approximately 5%. As

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March to August 2014, it remained quite stable.

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, in

January

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2014, the

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had a significant drop to about -3%. Regardless

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the current position, It appeared that

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had an enormous

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to -1% as it remained stable for 3 months. Whilst

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October there was a minimal

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, the

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of

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managed to

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about 3% in November and

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in December 2014. The

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of

zinc

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had a considerable fluctuation throughout the

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. It started

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2014, there was a marked

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2% in February 2014.

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, the trend started to change

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March, as it moderately rose to -1%

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June 2014. There was a minimal increase

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July 2014, Whilst it remained stable until the

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of September 2014. Starting

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October 2014, the chart had changes as it increased to approximately 2% until the

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of the

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.