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This diagram shows the relationship among a number of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

This diagram shows the relationship among a number of different languages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The diagram shown above illustrates the relationship between a number of different languages. The main discussion at the top,
English
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 the centre of
this
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 branch.
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 continued with a dichotomy of two types of
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 worldwide i.e. American and British. The rest are the subordinates that we will mention
further
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. The American
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 Branch consists of the USA and Canada. Affected by it are both the Anglophone and Francophone of the Country itself.
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, America's accent has a bit wider influence, there is
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 spoken with a hint of an accent from American Samoa, Mid-Southern
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,
West
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 Coast, North-East Coast, Puerto Rico and far in the East, Philipines.
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, British
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 Brand has the widest effect which is heard not only in the UK but
also
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 in the universe.
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in the British Isles, there are Iris,
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, Welsh, and Scottish.
Second,
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in the
West
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 Indies are Jamaica and Barbados.
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in the Indian and Pakistani groups, we can find forms of Indian
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. Fourth, Africa is divided into three types i.e.
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, East, and Anglophones of Africa. Fifth, in the far South, Australia, is known for two kinds which are Australia and New Zealand.
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, in the Far East, are Malay and Chinese. These are how the relationship of different characters and cultures altered our main international dialect. There are similarities and diversity, whether we compare it with the nearby or remote areas.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words english, west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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