The following charts show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in two years. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following charts show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in two years. Report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of
electricity
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generated in the country of France for 1990 and 2010 by five different energies, coal, oil, natural gas, hydro and nuclear
power
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.
Overall
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, it can be seen that nuclear
power
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's total production in 1990 was next to
last
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became the majority
power
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source in 2010,
while
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hydropower was still the minority one.
It is clear that
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in 1990, natural gas and coal contributed an identical percentage of
electricity
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in France, which make up just over a quarter of the total, 28%.
While
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compared with the two dominant
power
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resources, oil produced slightly below them with just under a quarter of the total, 22%. The remaining 23% of
power
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was composed of nuclear
power
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and hydropower with 17% and 6% respectively. Looking into the information for more details, nuclear
power
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embraced a boom in generating electrical
power
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, and the total proportion of
electricity
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produced by nuclear
power
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was set to increase by a factor of four, from 17% to almost 68% (67%). In 2010, there were still two fuel sources that produced the same amount of
electricity
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,
however
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, they were coal and oil with 13%, not coal and natural.
Additionally
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, natural gas drastically dropped to just 4% of the fuel source for electrical output and the remaining 2% of
power
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was produced using hydropower.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, power with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • electricity production
  • fuel source
  • nuclear power
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • coal
  • natural gas
  • oil
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • biomass
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant change
  • trend
  • distribution
  • energy mix
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