The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.

The chart below shows the Japan’s population by age groups starting in 1960 and including a forecast to 2040.
The line graph gives information about Japan's population proportion by three age groups beginning in 1960 over the period of 80 years. Looking from an
overall
perspective,
it is clear that
the major part of the population consists of
people
between 25 and 64 ages,
this
figure fluctuates between 50 and 70 per cent. A deep analysis of the graph shows that in 2000 year in Japan citizens aged between 0 and 14 fell from 30% to 20%,
however
, the indicator of 65+
aged
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people
experienced a slight increase from 5% to 15%.
Nevertheless
, the percentage of individuals between 25 and 64 ages remained stable, approximately 65%.
On the other hand
, by 2040 the proportion of 65+
people
will have risen to 35%,
whereas
the figure of
people
between 0 and 14 ages will witness a considerable decrease to 10%. At the same time, in 2040 citizens aged from 25 to 64 will see a slow drop to 55%.
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