Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As humans now live in

contemporary

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era where

internet

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the internet

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is more accessible, many individuals believe that traditional

school

is no longer efficient

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with self-taught learning from the

internet

. In

this

essay

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I will extend my disagreement as well to give some illustrations in the paragraphs below. First and foremost, people should not be dependent on

contents

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in

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on

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the

internet

as they might be fake and less credible.

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phenomenon is because there is

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freedom of many users in using

this

platform as they freely spread misinformation without

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any consequences.

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, it

is commonly believe

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in many institutions

that is

probihited

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prohibited

for

students

to use

internet

source

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sources

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for their

school

tasks as most of the materials in there do not have any legal or

academically

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research.

As a result

,

students

highly will not get the best learning outcome if they do not get the

knowledges

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knowledge

pieces of knowledge

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not from academic sources like the actual journals or people with

education

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backgrounds, namely teachers. More than that, electronic learning likely

make

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makes

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students

to

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have

less

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fewer

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interpersonal relationships.

This

issue is based on how kids tend to learn all by themselves

and

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which

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push

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pushes

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them into individualists,

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with attending the

old

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styled schools where it is undirectly

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them to make friends

in

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there. To illustrate, most of the

students

will make their own groups consist friends to engage with as they will spend most of the

times

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with them,

such

for

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as

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lunch activities,

teamworks

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teamwork

, and sports. In comparison with

the

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internet

-based learning, learners will not have

a

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real life

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real-life

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experience

on

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in

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that

certain

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area.

To sum up

,

school

is still highly needed in

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society as it has various

of

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advantages

in contrast

with gaining insights from the

internet

autodidactly

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autodidact

.

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is because not only

school

has

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have

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a better education system, but

also

give

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many children practical learning on how to be socially adaptive.