Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Thebefore, all students have to wear school uniforms.
Juvenails
Correct your spelling
Juveniles
emphasis
Replace the word
emphasise
on
learning Change preposition
apply
on
Change preposition
in
classroon
rather than Correct your spelling
classroom
fashon
dress.all learners must wear Correct your spelling
fashion
school
uniforms.I Use synonyms
compleately
agree with the Correct your spelling
completely
notio
and the reasons for Correct your spelling
notion
myopinion
will Correct your spelling
my opinion
be illustrate
in Change the verb form
be illustrated
forthcoming
paragraph with relevant illustrations.
Add an article
a forthcoming
the forthcoming
To begin
with, unifrm isLinking Words
an
identity of Correct article usage
the
students
.especially in outside Use synonyms
curarriculam easly
Correct your spelling
curriculum easily
identify
Correct subject-verb agreement
identifies
ecah
Correct your spelling
each
school
Use synonyms
students
.Use synonyms
it
Capitalize word
It
provide
equality Change the verb form
provides
of
Change preposition
for
students
.Use synonyms
Linking Words
for
instance, rich and poor Capitalize word
For
students
are learning same Use synonyms
school
.there is no discrimination Use synonyms
using
Change preposition
in using
Use synonyms
uniform
.Fix the agreement mistake
uniforms
Linking Words
Moreover
Add a comma
Moreover,
low income
parents have Add a hyphen
low-income
burden
Correct article usage
a burden
usin
Correct your spelling
using
us in
fashonable
Correct your spelling
fashionable
cloths
as well Correct your spelling
clothes
sudents
Correct your spelling
students
spent
more time for their shopping .They could not Wrong verb form
spend
concerate
Correct your spelling
concentrate
their
education.in Change preposition
on their
recent
Correct article usage
a recent
study
Add a comma
study,
China
and Correct your spelling
Chinese
japan
Replace the word
Japanese
school
Use synonyms
stdent
must wear Correct your spelling
student
students
Use synonyms
uniform
from one to Fix the agreement mistake
uniforms
twelth
standard .
Correct your spelling
twelfth
on the other hand
,some Linking Words
students
are not comfort theirUse synonyms
Fix the agreement mistake
uniforms
uniform
.They could not Use synonyms
decision take
to select Wrong verb form
decide
convenient
Correct article usage
a convenient
uniform
.so Use synonyms
thet
Correct your spelling
they
y
distracted in Correct your spelling
were
Add an article
the class
a class
class room
.Correct your spelling
classroom
especialy
girls Correct your spelling
especially
are faced
Change the verb form
have faced
Linking Words
this
problem.Change preposition
with this
Use synonyms
school
is Capitalize word
School
noyt
Correct your spelling
not
show
of place.it is valuable for learning.
Correct article usage
a show
To conclude
,Linking Words
Use synonyms
uniform
is more suitable for Add an article
the uniform
a uniform
students
in Use synonyms
school
rather than fashion Use synonyms
cloths
.Correct your spelling
clothes
Submitted by ck.manshad on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
task response
Ensure that your essay has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. You should clearly state your opinion in the introduction, develop your argument with supported main points in the body, and then summarize your views in the conclusion, keeping everything relevant to the question.
coherence cohesion
Your essay should flow logically from one idea to the next, using cohesive devices such as pronouns, conjunctions, and linking words effectively. It's also essential to maintain paragraphing, with one main idea per paragraph and clear topic sentences.
language
Proofread your work to correct grammatical errors and improve lexical resource by using a greater range of vocabulary. Additionally, work on sentence complexity and variety to enhance readability.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.