Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available
Dear Mrs. Barret,
I am writing with reference to your advertisement looking for house help in the upcoming summer I would like to apply for that. I could help you with your daily routine and household chores.
For instance
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cooking snacks, sweeping, vacuuming, grocery shopping, watering the plants, mowing the lawns, weeding the gardens, and so on.
Let me explain my problem in more detail currently, I am working as a customer care representative at a call centre in the evening shift and my income does not meet my expenses Linking Words
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, you can decide your convenient work hours.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
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Submitted by Haris Khan on
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format
The greeting could be improved by using 'Dear Mrs. Barrett,' to demonstrate appropriate format and professionalism. Consistency in addressing the recipient correctly is important.
coherence
Remember to separate ideas into clear paragraphs, which you've done adequately, but aim for more fluid transitions between them.
tone
The tone of your letter is generally suitable, but ensure that the language remains formal throughout, avoiding too casual phrases that might detract from the overall professionalism.
task response
You've responded to the task fairly well, providing explanations on how you can help, your reasons for wanting the job, and your availability. Make sure to fully elaborate on each point for clarity.