The diagrams below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year
The two maps compare the layout of an airport in the Southwest in the present
to
and the plan one year ahead. Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is evident that the airport has fewer gates
and facilities currently which will be added in the following year.
The airport had only one door each for the entrance of departures and arrivals. There are a few facilities on Correct article usage
the departures
departures sides
Fix the agreement mistake
departure side
such
as a check-in counter which will be moved to the opposite of where it is located. The additional facility such
as bag drop area will be developed too in the departures while
the cafe will be moved near to it. A new facilities
will be added Correct the article-noun agreement
New facilities
A new facility
are
bag drop next to password control customs, ATM, and car hire, respectively.
On the other side of password Unnecessary verb
apply
control
there was a footpath to the eight Add a comma
control,
gates
of the airports. The passengers could take a walkway built there to gates
that run through gate
one, two and three. Fix the agreement mistake
gates
This
walkway will be demolished and changed to sky trains in the middle of the walk
path to the Change the verb form
walking
gates
.The gates
will be increased to 18 gates
with two tracks, divided for gate
three to nine and ten to sixteen.Fix the agreement mistake
gates
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moved" was used 2 times.
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