The chart bellow shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart bellow shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The given chart depicts the percentage of residents buying and drinking habits of
coffee
and tea in five
cities
in Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaine
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Adelaide
, Hobart).
Overall
, all the respondents in all
cities
have mainly gone to a café in the
last
4 weeks,
while
the
one
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ones
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that bought fresh
coffee
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had
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the lowest percentage from all categories in all five
cities
.
Three
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The three
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most dominant
people
went
café
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to café
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from the highest areas
from
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apply
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Melbourne, Hobarts and Sydney, respectively. In 4 weeks, café preference was
a
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half
more
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higher than the one who bought
a
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fresh
coffee
in Melbourne,
while
instant
coffee
stood at
little
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a little
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less than 50%. In Hobart, there is a significant percentage of each category
for
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going to a cafe,
instant
coffee
, and fresh
coffee
with more than 60%, below 55% and less than 40% respectively.
Although
people
in Sydney who prefer drinking in the cafe reach over 60%,
instant
coffee
and fresh
coffee
only around 45%.
Next,
there are two
cities
where the survey of
people
who went to café and bought
instant
coffee
did not fall behind
while
both of them bought fresh
coffee
and did not reach 35%.
People
who went to café are over 55% and just below 50%, others who choose
coffee
instantly are close enough with only around 3% and 0.5% difference for Brisbane and
Adelaine
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Adelaide
, respectively.
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