The chart bellow shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The given chart depicts the percentage of residents buying and drinking habits of
coffee
and tea in five cities
in Australia (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaine
, Hobart). Correct your spelling
Adelaide
Overall
, all the respondents in all cities
have mainly gone to a café in the last
4 weeks, while
the one
that bought fresh Correct pronoun usage
ones
coffee
has
the lowest percentage from all categories in all five Wrong verb form
had
cities
.
Three
most dominant Correct article usage
The three
people
went café
from the highest areas Change preposition
to café
from
Melbourne, Hobarts and Sydney, respectively. In 4 weeks, café preference was Change preposition
apply
a
half Correct article usage
apply
more
higher than the one who bought Change the word
apply
a
fresh Correct article usage
apply
coffee
in Melbourne, while
instant
coffee
stood at little
less than 50%. In Hobart, there is a significant percentage of each category Correct article usage
a little
for
going to a cafe, Change preposition
apply
instant
coffee
, and fresh coffee
with more than 60%, below 55% and less than 40% respectively. Although
people
in Sydney who prefer drinking in the cafe reach over 60%, instant
coffee
and fresh coffee
only around 45%.
Next,
there are two cities
where the survey of people
who went to café and bought instant
coffee
did not fall behind while
both of them bought fresh coffee
and did not reach 35%. People
who went to café are over 55% and just below 50%, others who choose coffee
instantly are close enough with only around 3% and 0.5% difference for Brisbane and Adelaine
, respectively.Correct your spelling
Adelaide
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