the table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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of the worldwide notebook computer’s

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from seven different companies namely HP, Dell, Acer, Toshiba, Lenovo, Fujitsu-Siemens, and “Others” between 2006 and 2007. In general, HP had the highest proportion of

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in both years,

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Fujitsu-Siemens did the reverse. To commence with, HP had the highest

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of notebook computer’s

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in both years (31.4% in 2006 and 34% in 2007). Meanwhile, Fujitsu-Siemens got the lowest compared to the others at 4.8% and 2.3%, respectively.

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in 2006, “Others” was in

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second place for notebook computer’s

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(22.8%), but it

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by Dell (20.2%) in 2007. The

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of the

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of Acer slightly decreased from 11.6% in 2006 to 10.7% in 2007.

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, Toshiba and Lenovo shared

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similar proportion in both years.

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, Toshiba experienced an incline

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approximately 1.1%, but Lenovo decreased

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about 0.4%.