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the table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table given provides information about the
percentage
 of the worldwide notebook computer’s
market
share
 from seven different companies namely HP, Dell, Acer, Toshiba, Lenovo, Fujitsu-Siemens, and “Others” between 2006 and 2007. In general, HP had the highest proportion of
market
share
 in both years,
while
 Fujitsu-Siemens did the reverse. To commence with, HP had the highest
percentage
 of notebook computer’s
market
share
 in both years (31.4% in 2006 and 34% in 2007). Meanwhile, Fujitsu-Siemens got the lowest compared to the others at 4.8% and 2.3%, respectively.
Next,
in 2006, “Others” was in
the
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second place for notebook computer’s
market
share
 (22.8%), but it
surpassed
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 by Dell (20.2%) in 2007. The
percentage
 of the
market
share
 of Acer slightly decreased from 11.6% in 2006 to 10.7% in 2007.
Additionally
, Toshiba and Lenovo shared
the
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 similar proportion in both years.
However
, Toshiba experienced an incline
percentage
for
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 approximately 1.1%, but Lenovo decreased
for
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 about 0.4%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, market, share with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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