Nowadays as a part of education process students work at our company for short period of time without pay do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages
In the modern world, the
internship
program is crucial
Add an article
a crucial
method
for many university students
.This
method
can encourage students
learn
new things.Add the particle
to learn
However
,some people suggest that trainees should get wage
from companies. Fix the agreement mistake
wages
This
choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed in this
essay.
To begin
with,one of the advantage
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advantages
internship
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of internship
program
is improve skills and knowledge Fix the agreement mistake
programs
from
workplaces. Change preposition
in
For example
, students
can participate with
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in
actual
workplace.When they join Add an article
the actual
the
group of work that can improve social abilities Correct article usage
a
such
as socializing, teamwork
. Correct word choice
and teamwork
Moreover
, this
method
increase
experience for many Change the verb form
increases
students
and that impact
to Correct subject-verb agreement
impacts
future
career
of many Fix the agreement mistake
careers
students
.Thus
,this
method
has
Verb problem
is
importance
for university Replace the word
important
students
because can inspire Correct pronoun usage
them for
for
choose Change preposition
to
correct
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the correct
career
or teach them know
the culture of Verb problem
apply
industrial
.In some Replace the word
the industry
case
that Fix the agreement mistake
cases
resulting
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results
to
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in
change
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a change
faculty
or Change preposition
of faculty
change
Verb problem
apply
future
job
.
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jobs
On the other hand
, some people argue that internship
is not Correct article usage
an internship
best
way Add an article
the best
for
investigate Change preposition
to
future
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a future
career
.ฺBy the reasons of
in the Change preposition
apply
future
many students
will change job
from Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
the
first job to increase Change the word
their
income
.Correct pronoun usage
their income
Also
in some companies
they Add a comma
companies,
does
not spend the budget Change the verb form
do
for
hire Change preposition
to
trainee
.Because they think that Fix the agreement mistake
trainees
students
still not
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do not
enough
abilities. Add a missing verb
have enough
Furthermore
,some company
believe that Fix the agreement mistake
companies
internship
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internships
is
not effective for search Correct subject-verb agreement
are
correct
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the correct
career
path.
In conclusion,it is undeniable that a lot of university
believe Change to a plural noun
universities
to establish
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in establishing
internship
program
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programs
for
improve Change preposition
to
skills
and knowledge of Correct article usage
the skills
students
. Because they think that it is major
activity Correct article usage
a major
can
develop Correct pronoun usage
that can
students
for career
.I strongly believe Fix the agreement mistake
careers
this
trend because of it
advantages,which is Change the pronoun
its
encourage
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encouraging
student
to the correct way.Fix the agreement mistake
students
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Ensure the introduction clearly presents the topic and outlines the essay's position, whether it argues for the advantages or against the disadvantages. The conclusion should also clearly summarize the main points and restate the essay's position.
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- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example
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