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Nowadays as a part of education process students work at our company for short period of time without pay do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

#part #education #process #students #work #company #period #time #outweigh
In the modern world, the
internship
 program is
crucial
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a crucial
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method
 for many university
students
.
This
method
 can encourage
students
learn
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to learn
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 new things.
However
,some people suggest that trainees should get
wage
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 from companies.
This
 choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed in
this
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To begin
 with,one of the
advantage
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advantages
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internship
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of internship
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program
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programs
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 is improve skills and knowledge
from
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in
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 workplaces.
For example
,
students
 can participate
with
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in
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actual
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the actual
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 workplace.When they join
the
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 group of work that can improve social abilities
such
 as socializing,
teamwork
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.
Moreover
,
this
method
increase
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increases
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 experience for many
students
 and that
impact
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impacts
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 to
future
career
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careers
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 of many
students
.
Thus
,
this
method
has
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importance
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 for university
students
 because can inspire
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them for
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for
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to
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 choose
correct
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the correct
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career
 or teach them
know
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apply
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the culture of
industrial
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the industry
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.In some
case
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cases
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 that
resulting
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to
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in
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change
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a change
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faculty
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of faculty
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 or
change
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future
job
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jobs
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.
On the other hand
, some people argue that
internship
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an internship
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 is not
best
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the best
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 way
for
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to
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 investigate
future
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a future
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career
.ฺBy the reasons
of
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in the
future
 many
students
 will change
job
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jobs
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 from
the
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their
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 first job to increase
income
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their income
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.
Also
 in some
companies
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companies,
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 they
does
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do
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 not spend the budget
for
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to
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 hire
trainee
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trainees
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.Because they think that
students
 still
not
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do not
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enough
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have enough
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 abilities.
Furthermore
,some
company
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companies
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 believe that
internship
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internships
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is
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are
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 not effective for search
correct
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the correct
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career
 path. In conclusion,it is undeniable that a lot of
university
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universities
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 believe
to establish
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in establishing
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internship
program
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programs
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for
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to
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 improve
skills
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the skills
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 and knowledge of
students
. Because they think that it is
major
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a major
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 activity
can
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that can
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 develop
students
 for
career
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careers
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.I strongly believe
this
 trend because of
it
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 advantages,which is
encourage
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encouraging
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student
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students
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 to the correct way.
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task achievement
Ensure the introduction clearly presents the topic and outlines the essay's position, whether it argues for the advantages or against the disadvantages. The conclusion should also clearly summarize the main points and restate the essay's position.
coherence cohesion
Organize ideas logically and use paragraphs effectively, each paragraph should have a clear main idea and be well-developed with supporting sentences.
task achievement
Expand on main points with relevant and specific examples to illustrate the arguments and enhance the essay's persuasiveness.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.

Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.

When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.

Linking words for giving examples:

  • for example
  • for instance
  • to illustrate this
  • to give a clear example
  • such as
  • namely
  • to illustrate
  • take, for example

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Internship
  • Unpaid work
  • Vocational training
  • Skill acquisition
  • Professional network
  • Workplace dynamics
  • Exploitation
  • Labor laws
  • Career development
  • Corporate responsibility
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