The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the global
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) of notebook and computer industries in 2006 and 2007. In general, in both years, HP had the biggest Change the spelling
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whereas
Fujitsu-Siemens had the lowest one.
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with 31,4% and increased by 2,6% to 34% in the following years. In 2007, Dell and Toshiba witnessed a rise in their Use synonyms
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, 16,6% and 6,2%.
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but declined to 10,7% in 2007. Lenovo had a slight fall with only 0,4% in a year, from 6,6% to 6,2%, Remove the comma
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experienced the biggest jump, 2,5% and 3,5%, respectively. Dell successfully took over 2006 second largest Use synonyms
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company, Others, in 2007 with a 1,1% gap.Use synonyms
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