The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graphs provide insights into the
overall
attendance at Ashdown Museum
and visitor satisfaction
levels before and after the renovation.
In the initial chart, there's a depiction of the total visitor count over time, indicating a higher turnout prior to the refurbishment. Following
this
, the pie charts break down visitor satisfaction
into five levels. Before the renovation, a majority of visitors
expressed discontent with the museum
's offerings. However
, there was a notable improvement in satisfaction
post-refurbishment.
The information from the charts on the left reveals that 3 in 10 visitors
were highly satisfied, and 15% found the experience to be enjoyable. On the flip side, more than half of the attendees were not pleased with the quality of the gallery.
After the refurbishment, a significant portion of visitors
had a positive experience, with 40% expressing strong satisfaction
and 35% indicating general satisfaction
. Around 15% of individuals were dissatisfied with the museum
's arrangements.
Additionally
, there was an increase in the overall
number of visitors
to Ashdown Museum
, reaching 18,000 people in the year following the renovation.Submitted by binyang212 on
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