The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graphs provide insights into the
overall
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attendance at Ashdown
Museum
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and visitor
satisfaction
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levels before and after the renovation. In the initial chart, there's a depiction of the total visitor count over time, indicating a higher turnout prior to the refurbishment.
Following
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this
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, the pie charts break down visitor
satisfaction
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into five levels. Before the renovation, a majority of
visitors
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expressed discontent with the
museum
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's offerings.
However
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, there was a notable improvement in
satisfaction
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post-refurbishment. The information from the charts on the left reveals that 3 in 10
visitors
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were highly satisfied, and 15% found the experience to be enjoyable. On the flip side, more than half of the attendees were not pleased with the quality of the gallery. After the refurbishment, a significant portion of
visitors
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had a positive experience, with 40% expressing strong
satisfaction
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and 35% indicating general
satisfaction
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. Around 15% of individuals were dissatisfied with the
museum
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's arrangements.
Additionally
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, there was an increase in the
overall
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number of
visitors
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to Ashdown
Museum
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, reaching 18,000 people in the year following the renovation.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, satisfaction, visitors with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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