In many countries it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

Adverts for beer, wine and spirits are now banned in many nations.

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essay agrees with

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idea because drinking can lead to serious health problems and

advertises

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advertisements

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can often influence people to drink more than they should. Advertising alcoholic drinks should be banned because

alcohol

is harmful to a person's health. Drinking too much

cause

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causes

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several conditions including liver cirrhosis, gallbladder carcinoma, diabetes and brain damage.

This

puts a huge strain on the health services and not only causes suffering to the patients but

also

to their families.

for

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example, Russia had a huge problem with alcoholism and many men were dying from

alcohol

-related diseases, but after they decided to stop companies promoting

alcohol

beverages on TV and in prints and, it resulted in a huge reduction of

such

cases. Another reason why the promotion of

alcohol

should be prohibited is the fact that it influences people unfairly to buy that product. The main goal of any advertising campaign is to sell more and

this

could be seen as irresponsible considering the harm drinking can do. Commercials often make certain drink brands look cool, in order to sway potential customers and don't actually talk about the dangers.

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, Hennessy adverts often portray attractive men and women in a lavish setting, drinking cognac with a beautiful woman. In conclusion,

alcohol

is a hazardous product and advertisers should not be allowed to try and convince people to drink it

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I

therefore

believe that more countries should ban the advertising of liquor.