20.The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram provides information about how
milk
and related products are manufactured. The process begins with cows grazing and ends with items in supermarkets and shops.
It can be seen that in the first stage, cows graze grass to have the energy to produce Use synonyms
milk
, which is Use synonyms
then
extracted twice a day by the milking machine. Linking Words
Following
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this
, the Linking Words
milk
is transferred into refrigeration storage and Use synonyms
then
delivered daily to the dairy by the Linking Words
milk
tanker.
Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the dairy follows a variety of processes to produce serval different types of products including cheese, cream, and butter. Linking Words
In addition
, some of the Linking Words
milk
is pasteurized and packaged into bottles. Use synonyms
Finally
, the product is sent to supermarkets and shops ready for purchase.
Linking Words
Overall
, the process involves serval stages to produce Linking Words
milk
and related products that consumers enjoy. It is interesting that it starts from cows’ Use synonyms
milk
but becomes various items Use synonyms
such
as cheese, cream, Linking Words
milk
and butter.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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