20.The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram provides information about how
milk
and related products are manufactured. The process begins with cows grazing and ends with items in supermarkets and shops.
It can be seen that in the first stage, cows graze grass to have the energy to produce milk
, which is then
extracted twice a day by the milking machine. Following
this
, the milk
is transferred into refrigeration storage and then
delivered daily to the dairy by the milk
tanker.
Subsequently
, the dairy follows a variety of processes to produce serval different types of products including cheese, cream, and butter. In addition
, some of the milk
is pasteurized and packaged into bottles. Finally
, the product is sent to supermarkets and shops ready for purchase.
Overall
, the process involves serval stages to produce milk
and related products that consumers enjoy. It is interesting that it starts from cows’ milk
but becomes various items such
as cheese, cream, milk
and butter.Submitted by sunnyrogle22 on
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