20.The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

20.The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are produced.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Write at least 150 words.
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The diagram provides information about how
milk
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and related products are manufactured. The process begins with cows grazing and ends with items in supermarkets and shops. It can be seen that in the first stage, cows graze grass to have the energy to produce
milk
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, which is
then
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extracted twice a day by the milking machine.
Following
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this
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, the
milk
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is transferred into refrigeration storage and
then
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delivered daily to the dairy by the
milk
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tanker.
Subsequently
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, the dairy follows a variety of processes to produce serval different types of products including cheese, cream, and butter.
In addition
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, some of the
milk
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is pasteurized and packaged into bottles.
Finally
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, the product is sent to supermarkets and shops ready for purchase.
Overall
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, the process involves serval stages to produce
milk
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and related products that consumers enjoy. It is interesting that it starts from cows’
milk
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but becomes various items
such
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as cheese, cream,
milk
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and butter.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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