21.The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

21.The diagram shows the process by which sheep embryos are cloned.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

Write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of flowering
plants
. There are six stages process begins with
seeds
and how
plants
grow from seed, which includes the transport of insects and
pollen
, with the final step becoming
plants
. In the first stage, bare
seeds
absorb the water from the ground in order to prepare the condition for germination. When there is enough water and warmth surrounding the
seeds
, they germinate, and the new roots begin to form.
Following
this
, the roots take hold and the stem is ready to grow out of the soil toward the sunlight. Eventually, leaves are produced and stem grows longer and flowers are
finally
formed which attract insects and
pollen
for the next stage of pollination. During pollination, insects carry
pollen
and transport
pollen
between
plants
. After a long of fertilisation seed and fruit begin to form. Fertilization is an important step in which both fruit and seed are produced by the plant.
Finally
, the
seeds
are in full form and dispersed away from the plant, and the process begins again.
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