The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price. You should write at least 150 words.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

*Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

You should write at least 150 words.
The tables compare Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and
bananas
sales
(in millions of
Euros
) across five different
countries
in Europe for the years 1999 and 2004.
Overall
,
sales
data for both
coffee
and
bananas
indicates a growth in almost all the nations.
Sales
of
coffee
increased most and least in the
UK
and Denmark, respectively,
whereas
the rate of change in Fairtrade banana
sales
was the highest in Denmark during
this
time. The first table shows the highest number of
coffee
sales
in Switzerland, which was exactly 3
million
Euros
in 1999. The
sales
in the
UK
were half of that, and the lowest
sales
were recorded in Sweden, with less than 1
million
Euros
. After five years, the
coffee
sales
in these five
countries
went up with a remarkable improvement in the
UK
. The
sales
rose significantly to 20
million
Euros
in 2004 which was almost double the total
sales
in the remaining four
countries
. The second table displays the
sales
of
bananas
. In general, Switzerland had the highest income from
bananas
in both 1994 and 2014.
Additionally
, banana
sales
climbed in three
countries
- the
UK
, Switzerland, and Denmark - between the two years.
Conversely
, the
sales
of
bananas
in Sweden and Belgium declined in 2014 to around 1
million
Euros
over the period.
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