The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. *Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price. You should write at least 150 words.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

*Fairtrade: a category of products for which farmers from developing countries have been paid an officially agreed fair price.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The tables compare Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
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and
bananas
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sales
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(in millions of
Euros
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) across five different
countries
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in Europe for the years 1999 and 2004.
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,
sales
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data for both
coffee
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and
bananas
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indicates a growth in almost all the nations.
Sales
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of
coffee
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increased most and least in the
UK
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and Denmark, respectively,
whereas
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the rate of change in Fairtrade banana
sales
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was the highest in Denmark during
this
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time. The first table shows the highest number of
coffee
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sales
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in Switzerland, which was exactly 3
million
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Euros
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in 1999. The
sales
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in the
UK
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were half of that, and the lowest
sales
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were recorded in Sweden, with less than 1
million
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Euros
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. After five years, the
coffee
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sales
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in these five
countries
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went up with a remarkable improvement in the
UK
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. The
sales
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rose significantly to 20
million
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Euros
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in 2004 which was almost double the total
sales
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in the remaining four
countries
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. The second table displays the
sales
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of
bananas
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. In general, Switzerland had the highest income from
bananas
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in both 1994 and 2014.
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, banana
sales
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climbed in three
countries
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- the
UK
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, Switzerland, and Denmark - between the two years.
Conversely
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, the
sales
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of
bananas
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in Sweden and Belgium declined in 2014 to around 1
million
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Euros
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over the period.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, bananas, sales, euros, countries, uk, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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