You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. https://ieltsonlinetests.com/sites/default/files/2020-12/2.jpg
The picture illustrates the changes in cutting tools between
Tool
A as a cutting tool
1.4 million
years
ago and Tool
B as a cutting tool
0.8 million
years
ago.
In general, these tools had some significant changes due to
their appearance, But regarding the height, tool
A and tool
B stayed at the same size which is 5cm.
1.4 million
years
ago, the cutting tool
seemed like a basic shape following the shape of the original stone. Tool
A's front and back views seemed like rough textures, whilst the wide was also
quite bold. The tip of this
tool
looked not sharp enough.
After 0.6 million
years
, the cutting tool
has developed its appearance and its function has become better. Tool
B’s texture looked smooth and its width was slimmer. Moreover
, the back texture had a different texture from the front side, it could be following the shape of the user's hand, and the tip was also
sharper, by then
this
tool
was more comfortable and effective to use as a cutting tool
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