Many Le Thanh Tong grade 11 students lack focus and drive. What is the causes for this? What do you do think is the most effective solution?

All around the world, many students in higher classes are demotivated daily. Whether it is losing the work ethic to study for exams, or the drive and focus to prepare for their future. In my opinion, it is really easy to

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track of the path you are following,

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a lot

of pressure put on by your

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ones. In

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situation. Usually, parents are the culprit

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putting an infinite amount of pressure on a high-school

student

. Grade 11 is supposedly labelled as one of the most critical years of deciding your future by many.

Nonetheless

, as a growing teen, constant input of pressure can lead to stress and anxiety which can

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cause a decrease in their motivation towards school. Ultimately,

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leading on to lower marks across school projects.

For instance

, a peer at my own school was constantly told to be the best in their class by his parents

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and was held up with high

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expectations

by everyone. In the future, it did cause him to be extremely demotivated as he was drained out trying to

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everyone's expectations.

Moreover

, as I briefly highlighted before, exam grades can make or break a

student

's entire work ethic. Nowadays, most

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universities

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for a

student

to enter their application. When most students don't meet those requirements, they fall into a deep pit of sadness and depression. Unfortunately, it causes them to

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hope and they start downgrading themselves which negatively impacts their focus. I believe the most effective solution is to

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change the exam system,

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students

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constantly

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need to prove themselves to be good enough for the world.

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on to address the biggest concern, parents, educating them about

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stress, anxiety and mental-health issues will

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a difference.

As a result

, they will start encouraging their children rather than insulting their flaws.

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will eventually boost the child's confidence, leading him or her to gain back their motivation. In conclusion,

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really easy to point out someone's negative quality, which usually holds them up

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gunpoint to prove themselves. In

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process, they eventually

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and

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hope.

However

, educating people about the causes of

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can really help.

Furthermore

, building a support network between the parent and the

student

is the ultimate way to bring back focus and drive in a grade 11

student

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