People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, there is an increasing trend that people often pay their

bill

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through

credit

cards

.

Although

this

could provide

card holders

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some advantages, I still believe that the drawbacks of

this

trend

outweight

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outweigh

the benefits it offers.

First,

proponets

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proponents

may argue that paying through

credit

cards

is way more safer compared to

cashes

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cash

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. They might say carrying cash in your person can bring some risks, especially the possibility

to being

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committed

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crimes. They could point out that

this

threat can be solved by utilizing

credit

cards

.

This

is because even if

pickpocket

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had the

card

from others, they could not steal

money

from the

card

holders.

However

, these advocates fail to factor

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fact that being robbed means the owners

is

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not cautious enough, not

due to

paper

money

.

Furthermore

, having banknotes

are

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crucial in some situations. Imagine a person who could not remember his

card

's password when he needed to make immediate payment, especially in case of

immergency

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emergency

. Not only being

incovenient

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inconvenient

,

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but credit cards are also

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cards

are still having their own financial security concerns.

This

can be proved by the fact that some hackers can take advantage of

banking's

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errors and

stole

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money

from

the

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card

owners.

This

could lead to serious consequences if

this

practice could not be investigated and

fix

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, including

permarnently

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permanently

losing

money

and a sense of distrust in the banking systems. Those issues can be avoided if individuals switch from using online

money

to physical

cashes

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cash

amounts of cash

flows of cash

fistfuls of cash

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.

In other words

, people have a higher control of their property when using paper

money

. In conclusion, despite

of

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personal safety,

this

phenomenon mentioned above

are

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is

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likely

bring

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more concerns, including being inconvenient and financial security.