Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.
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The provided map delineates the transformation of
Chorleywood
, a village near London, from 1868 to 1994, with steadily increased population density since the middle of the 1800s.
To begin
with, the development of
Chorleywood
cumulatively spread throughout the region
along with
the newly constructed motorway and railway. In detail, the initial refinement was built between the West Main Road and
Chorleywood
Park and the Golf course from 1868 to 1883, before it expanded to the south, which is where
Chorleywood
Station is located.
Furthermore
, 1992 witnessed its extension adjacent to the rail track which was added in 1909. After 48 years, a motorway was created on the East side of the countryside, which
then
created two 4-way intersections with both the main street and the railway.
In addition
, an extra betterment was introduced in five areas that were spread along the intersections. Three of them were spotted around the Southeast intersection,
while
the other two were apparent on the upper side of the Northeast intersection.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chorleywood with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • village
  • population
  • increased steadily
  • middle of the nineteenth century
  • development
  • location
  • factors
  • contributing
  • physical
  • infrastructural
  • effects
  • conclusion
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