The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
The table below depicts the average sales of three different
branch
of a restaurant Fix the agreement mistake
branches
in
three different Change preposition
on
Vancouver
streets in 2016.
As can be seen
the Add a comma
seen,
Chicken
burger, Chicken
Wings and Chicken
Pasta are the most popular items in these three branches.
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we can mention thatAdd a comma
all,
,
the highest Remove the comma
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transaction
belongs to Fix the agreement mistake
number of transactions
Vancouver
Georgia Street
with 854 transactions. And the lowest transaction belongs to Vancouver
Dark Street
.
And the
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last
of all we can note that,
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Vancouver
Dunsmuir Street
with
5.61 dollars and the other two branches are more expensive Change preposition
at
with
9.02 and 10.69 dollars respectively. Change preposition
at
Overall
the Chicken
burger in Vancouver
Georgia Street
is the most popular item amongst the other items and branches.Submitted by Farzaneh Ka on
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