The chart shows the participation by young people in sports by gender in Great Britain.
The bar graph illustrates the percentage of youngsters
participation
in sports divided by gender in the United Kingdom in 2019. Replace the word
participating
Overall
, the number of people who took parts
in cycling was the highest, Fix the agreement mistake
part
whereas
the lowest was tennis. Throughout this
year there was a wide gap between the two groups in football.
To begin
with, football had the highest number of male participants, with almost 70%, rather than females which more
than three times lower. Slightly more boys Add a missing verb
was more
were
participated in cycling with 5% more than women. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, there was a significant gap between the two former sports and tennis, which it
only gained hardly 30%, and 5% higher than girls.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the other hand
, women exceeded men in swimming which accounted at
more than 50%, Change preposition
for
while
men less than half. In contrast
, the second highest category for women is roller blading
, though hiking showed similar proportions, Correct your spelling
rollerblading
were
less than 30%, respectively.Unnecessary verb
apply
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