The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two provided maps delineate the plan for converting an industrial area into a housing complex for labourers. Looking from an
overall
perspective, an extension of the main road is going to be made and connects with several to-be-constructed houses, which majority were originally factories.
Furthermore
, various public amenities were about to be introduced surrounding the area. In detail, a small roundabout
planned
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to be added
in
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the North side of the large roundabout, with shops and
medical
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centre above it.
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,
in
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the East road, there will be a creation
of
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playground between two houses
along with
a school
at the end
of the road which
replaced
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the former factories. All the industrial buildings alongside the roundabout will
then
converted
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into extra streets to the Northwest and North
area
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, with a bridge to pass the river which leads to the farmland. Those streets will later be surrounded
with
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four new housing units.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • factory complex
  • housing area
  • infrastructure
  • transportation links
  • amenities
  • environmental sustainability
  • residential buildings
  • communal facilities
  • work-life balance
  • industrial development
  • urban planning
  • green spaces
  • employee accommodation
  • accessibility
  • layout
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