The map shows the plan for a new factory complex and housing area for employees. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Two provided maps delineate the plan for converting an industrial area into a housing complex for labourers.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, an extension of the main road is going to be made and connects with several to-be-constructed houses, which majority were originally factories. Furthermore
, various public amenities were about to be introduced surrounding the area.
In detail, a small roundabout planned
to be added Add a missing verb
is planned
in
the North side of the large roundabout, with shops and Change preposition
on
medical
centre above it. Correct article usage
a medical
Moreover
, in
the East road, there will be a creation Change preposition
on
of
playground between two houses Change preposition
apply
along with
a school at the end
of the road which replaced
the former factories. All the industrial buildings alongside the roundabout will Wrong verb form
will replace
then
converted
into extra streets to the Northwest and North Add a missing verb
be converted
area
, with a bridge to pass the river which leads to the farmland. Those streets will later be surrounded Fix the agreement mistake
areas
with
four new housing units.Change preposition
by
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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