Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

While

some

museums

are free to

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, many others charge visitors for

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entrance

. taking funds for

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is alleged to be unnecessary

however

, it has many

privilleges

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privileges

for

museums

. I, personally consider

this

fee

essential. Myriad

museums

do not take

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from visitors.

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often rooted in providing an equal opportunity for all citizens. You need only look at poor families, to see how unaffordable is going to

museums

for them.

Museums

with free

enetry

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entry

energy

have many undeniable positive outcomes for society, as if all people,particularly people with lower income, still can visit cultural places and enhance their knowledge about arts and culture.

On the other hand

,

museums

ought to take

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for several reasons.

Firstly

, they need

money

to provide better services in order to satisfy visitors. Just consider how much

money

needs to be allocated for cleaning and maintaining the objects being kept there. In fact,

museums

use

this

money

to improve their services and amenities.

Secondly

,

museums

should pay their

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. Numerous people might work there and

museums

are able to pay their salary only when they take

entery

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entry

fees. When

museums

are free to enter, the

money

needed for

this

aspects

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is not provided easily. In conclusion, Even though

museums

not taking

fee

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can be a great and equal chance for all citizens to visit these unique places,

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for many

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imperative

factors

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employers' salaries and keeping precious objects,

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on

this

fee

. I, strongly opine that the disadvantages are way more in

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positive effects.