The chart bekow shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart bekow shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of US households (in millions) by yearly revenue
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shows five different earnings in dollars and how many houses were bought by people from 2007 to 2015. In 2007, the rate of households of society who earned less than $25,000 was 25
million
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and showed an increase to slightly under 30
million
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in 2011.
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of 2015 decreased to nearly 27
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household rate bought by
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and their earnings from $25,000 to $49,000 was around 27
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in 2007.
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, the next year it rose and reached 30
million
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and in 2015, reduced to 28
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. Owned houses by individuals and their profit between $50,000 and $74,999 were the number of 20
million
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and stayed the same during whole periods. People who had $75,000 to $99,999 every year, owned under 15
million
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houses during these three periods. The
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one and the highest rate of income of people with $100,000 or more bought nearly 30
million
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in 2007, but it peaked at 32
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and
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was the highest amount of households during
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three years
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