The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram illustrates the brick manufacturing
process
. Overall
, it can be seen that the are seven stages in the process
, first
is digging up the Correct article usage
The first
clay
and finishing with delivery
of brick to the construction.
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the delivery
To begin
, first
step of Change the article
the first
process
is Add an article
the process
excavator
Correct article usage
the excavator
is
dinged the Unnecessary verb
apply
clay
from the ground. After that
the Add a comma
that,
clay
growth
through Replace the word
grows
metal
grid, which Add an article
the metal
a metal
brakes
the Verb problem
breaks
clay
to
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into
the
small pieces and Correct article usage
apply
roller
Correct article usage
a roller
assist
Correct subject-verb agreement
assists
to
the Change preposition
in
process
. Then
sand and water are put to
the Change preposition
into
clay
and makes
Correct subject-verb agreement
make
mixture
.
Mixture put the wire culler for the making Correct article usage
a mixture
bricks
, before going to the drying oven. Drying
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The drying
process
takes 24-48 hours. Following
this
dried bricks
go through moderate. Next of
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apply
this
heating in a kiln and temperature Correct determiner usage
apply
change
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changes
200
C- Change preposition
from 200
1300
C. The Change preposition
to 1300
bricks
are cooled in the cooling chamber between 48-72 hours. After the bricks
are packed and finally
they are delivered to the construction.Submitted by janmuldayevaa1 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, clay, bricks with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "illustrates" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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