The chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in Western Cape between 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes in gross domestic product (GDP) in Western Cape between 2000 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts present data on the
percentage
of
GDP
the UK gained every two years from 1992 to 2000 from the IT
industry
and
service
industry
. Over the years, the IT
industry
contributes
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has contributed
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the highest to
UK's
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the UK's
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GDP
. The
percentage
of its contribution when juxtaposed with the
service
industry's
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industry
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showed a totally different trend. The IT
industry
contributions went up each year with quite significant
addition
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additions
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. Meanwhile, the
service
industry
grown
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has grown
grew
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at a steady pace. The IT
industry
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industry's
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contribution to
UK's
Correct article usage
the UK's
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GDP
soared in 2000 with
the
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a
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percentage
of around 15%. Its contribution has grown around 9% since it scored the lowest in 1992 with only 6%.
On
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In
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the same year, the
service
industry
reached its highest
GDP
percentage
in 2000 at around 8% and the lowest in 1992 at around 4%.
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Linking words: Add some linking words.
Linking words: Add linking words.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, gdp, industry, service with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Economic indicator
  • Timeframe
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Sector
  • Contribution
  • Correlation
  • Percentage
  • Increase/decrease
  • Significant
  • Policy
  • Economic crisis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Steady
  • Overview
  • Observation
  • Speculate
  • Summarize
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