The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The maps present the current look of the Norbiton industrial zone and its projected development plan.
Overall
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, it is clear from the plan that the goal is to transform the manufacturing zone into a residential neighbourhood with additional housing and public amenities. Currently, there is a roundabout which connects the southern and the eastern roads with several factories surrounding the area that are to be removed in the redevelopment. The eastern road is planned with houses along the way, a playground to the north, and a school
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. Aside from that, some roads are designed to be constructed to the northwest and to the north of the roundabout and over the river, with houses along and
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of both ways.
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, the farmland north of the river will be replaced by a house and relocated to the east. In terms of the southwest part of the roundabout, a shopping centre is projected to be established with a health facility to its southeast counterpart.
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, a second roundabout is
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to be added where the south road meets the main road in a T-junction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • future development
  • residential neighborhood
  • housing complexes
  • green spaces
  • parks and playgrounds
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • self-sufficient community
  • main road
  • pedestrian walkways
  • cycling paths
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • connecting roads
  • new bridges
  • accessibility
  • transportation links
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