The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps present the current look of the Norbiton industrial zone and its projected development plan.
Overall
, it is clear from the plan that the goal is to transform the manufacturing zone into a residential neighbourhood with additional housing and public amenities.
Currently, there is a roundabout which connects the southern and the eastern roads with several factories surrounding the area that are to be removed in the redevelopment. The eastern road is planned with houses along the way, a playground to the north, and a school Linking Words
at the end
. Aside from that, some roads are designed to be constructed to the northwest and to the north of the roundabout and over the river, with houses along and Linking Words
at the end
of both ways. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the farmland north of the river will be replaced by a house and relocated to the east.
In terms of the southwest part of the roundabout, a shopping centre is projected to be established with a health facility to its southeast counterpart. Linking Words
In addition
, a second roundabout is Linking Words
also
to be added where the south road meets the main road in a T-junction.Linking Words
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