Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are several positions that

consider

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as important to a

country

including doctors and engineers.

Thus

, some people argue that

professionals

like them must

work

in the

country

where they achieved their training.

However

,

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side with those who believe that

professionals

should not be given a limited option regarding the place where they

work

. It may seem that doctors and

professionals

are obligated to

work

in the same

country

as where they

done

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they

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degree

due to

a contract between the formal institute and the individuals.

For example

,

for

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those who received a scholarship from the government to study

at

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in

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their

country

sometimes

require

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to sign an agreement in which they should

be staying

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in that

country

and at least

to

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contribute for several years before going back home.

This

occurred because some parties demanded a return to their awardees for what they

have

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given to them. Having said that, it is quite unfair to imagine what will happen

for

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those developing

countries

or other

countries

that can not do the same. The imbalance proportion for the

countries

that are enable to provide proper facilities to support their citizens is truly devastating. They can waste many of the talented individuals who prefer to study abroad,

and

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leaving them to suffer alone. If

this

is happened

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,

then

who will help them develop the

countries

and

its

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people

?.

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Further

, we

also

need to acknowledge the area or

country

that

are

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affected by war, and

by

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allowing

professionals

to choose their

country

preference can definitely help

this

situation out.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that doctors and engineers hold an important role in which they should be given a free choice

where

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to implement their

work

.

Although

some parts of the world obliged their citizens or awardees to do so, still considering many aspects from balancing out

proportion

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proportions

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to

help

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helping

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people in need is much more necessary than contributing to the

countries

that have already developed

on

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