Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, it has become very common to witness young individuals learning a foreign language. The statistics demonstrate that 40 per cent of these learners are
studing
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studying
in primary schools and about 30 per cent are secondary
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students. There are some advantages
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as being able to immigrate
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early age and study from websites of other countries,
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, some disadvantages are included as well. In
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essay, I will explore the pros and cons of
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and try to draw some conclusions. One of the major benefits of doing
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at primary
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is that the opportunity of immigration will have happened by their eighteens.
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, in 2002, more than half of the immigrants to Canada were teenagers who studied
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at the
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beginning
years of their
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. Yet,
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in
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early
ages
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,
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brain can gain a lot of information quickly and well, which makes the learning
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process
faster. Another main advantage of
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is that they can watch movies or read books in the language they have learnt which makes them more literate than others when they are in secondary or high
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, they will be able to communicate with people who
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abroad.
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, the main drawback which many families
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to
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begin at that age is that the young individuals might get frustrated
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studing
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studying
which would lead them to obtain low scores, and as a child,
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would lower their confidence.
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, in an interview with these young teenagers in 2004, most of them were dissatisfied
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condition. Another downside of
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can be confusion. The reason for
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is the lack of general information, which in higher stages would be a great problem. In conclusion, there are both positives and negatives of doing
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in the starting years of
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. Personally, I believe, the beneficial points outweigh any drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive abilities
  • pronunciation
  • self-conscious
  • cultural awareness
  • global society
  • proficiency levels
  • competitive job market
  • foundational skills
  • qualified teachers
  • recreational activities
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