The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water

 consumption in two different countries.
The line graph and the data set illustrate the usage of
water
all around the world and the utilisation of
water
by two nations.
Overall
,during the course of a century, farming showcased a substantial increase in
water
consumption, and between the two countries, Brazil exceeded the Republic of Congo in terms of consumed
water
in the year 2000.
According to
the line chart, farmlands'
water
input began with a volume of around 500 km3 in 1990 and continued a gradual increase, reaching 1000 km3 of usage in the mid-nineteenth century, before reporting a massive surge to claim over 3000 km3 by the end of the nineteenth century. Both commercial and household
water
consumption followed the same trend as farmlands; they started with nearly 100 km3 of used
water
volume at the beginning and were
subsequently
followed by a steady rise until 150 km3 before
finally
reaching peaks of nearly 1000 km3 and a quarter of that, respectively. It is clearly visible from the table that Brazil is the country with a higher population and land area, resulting in a higher
water
consumption of 350 m3 than
that
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the Congo's modest use of 8 m3 in the year 2000.
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