Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

Noise
pollution has become an increasingly common problem around the globe. The majority of the
people
hold a view that the authorities should impose heavy
laws
and regulations to control the
noise
that
people
make every day because
this
causes distractions to
people
. The following essay will discuss the positives and negatives regarding
laws
on
noise
. The main advantage of having a strict law on
noise
will allow
public
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to have peaceful sleep at night because too much disturbance to a human's sleep will bring consequences to life
such
as health issues.
Besides
, sleep is essential for
good
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health of an individual to function their brain normally. As an example, in India, there is a restriction regulated by the government that after 11 pm on weekdays no loud
music
is played and if it is violated hefty fines will be given to
people
.
Furthermore
, another plus point is that
people
are able to concentrate more on work without being distracted by external sounds. For
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instance
, students who are studying and reading for exams
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do not get affected and can concentrate on that
also
office workers concentrate on their work. There are disadvantages to imposing
laws
on sounds because if authorities provide regulations to loud
music
and
noises
there will be a downfall in certain industries
thus
, they need loud
noises
to work. As an example, in the
music
industry, to publish a song or make one studio one should use different types of
noises
to test.
On the other hand
,
people
have the freedom to do whatever they prefer in the country, if
laws
and regulations are imposed, individuals will start using headphones to listen to
music
and
this
will bring serious negative effects to health
for instance
hearing issues.
Moreover
,
people
have no freedom and they want to enjoy and
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entertain
themselves. Another fact is that
people
celebrate their birthday parties and wedding functions so they want to celebrate their occasion.
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,
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strict
laws
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by the government are ignored by folks. In conclusion, few individuals have
this
opinion that strict norms must be applied to control
the
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noise
pollution in order to reduce the disturbance it causes. I believe that the advantages of
this
issue
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its disadvantages. For that
reason
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the government must take necessary action and restrict
people
from making
noises
.
Moreover
, it
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everyone's moral duty to create
peaceful
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a peaceful
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environment for
the
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society.
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