In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural area which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in development countries? What could be done to solve this problem?

Teachers
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played a crucial role in
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life
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since primary education to higher. In some second-tier nations, a qualified lecturer has huge demands in the
village
and it creates a negative impact on the education of the rural area's students. There are some reasons for
teachers
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not
interest
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to
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work
in those
places
and some possible solutions can be solved. There are some reasons for
teachers
do not want to
work
in the
village
. One of the main causes is that those
places
do not have basic amenities and educational supplements so that teacher's skills and knowledge cannot improve.
For example
, many Indian rural schools
have
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lack
of
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teachers
even if the government
teachers
too because they do not want to go there. Another reason is that
family
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families
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migration
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to the
village
from cities
while
their family members
also
have to suffer in rural
places
such
as transportation, medical
ans
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and
entertainment facilities. These are the main reasons
for
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the qualified
lectures
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lecturers
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do not like to
work
in those
places
. There are some possible solutions
can
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that can
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solve
this
problem. One of the feasible remedies is that the government should provide more hikes to
teachers
who are interested
to
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work
in the
village
, and
as a result
, tutors have to think about the financial benefits and they may
be
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be working
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work
there.
For instance
,
Sri
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the Sri
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Lanka government always provide
more
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higher
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salary
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salaries
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to professors who
willing
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are willing
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to
work
in those areas compared to cities. Another possible solution is that the authorities should implement a
rotation-based
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rotation based
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on
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apply
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working
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the working
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system,
cities
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in cities
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and villages in order to
they
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apply
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have to
work
in both
places
and both
studnet's
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student's
life might be improved by the qualified
teachers
.
To conclude
,
teachers
are not willing to
work
in the villages
due to
those
places
do not have the basic facilities and educational supplements
as well as
family
migartion
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migration
immigration
.
However
, the authorities should give more salaries to tutors who like to
work
there and they have to start a rotation-based
on
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working system
is
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as
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the solution
of
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this
issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Infrastructure
  • Resources
  • Professional growth
  • Pay and benefits
  • Isolation
  • Amenities
  • Safety concerns
  • Support system
  • Career advancement
  • Prospects
  • Cultural barriers
  • Language barriers
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