In some developing countries, it is difficult to get good teachers to work in rural area which can have a negative impact on the education of children in those rural communities. Why do you think good teachers do not want to work in rural areas in development countries? What could be done to solve this problem?
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and some possible solutions can be solved.
There are some reasons for teachers
do not want to work
in the village
. One of the main causes is that those places
do not have basic amenities and educational supplements so that teacher's skills and knowledge cannot improve. For example
, many Indian rural schools have
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teachers
even if the government teachers
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from cities while
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lecturers
work
in those places
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this
problem. One of the feasible remedies is that the government should provide more hikes to teachers
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in the village
, and as a result
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are willing
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in those areas compared to cities. Another possible solution is that the authorities should implement a rotation-based
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in both places
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.
To conclude
, teachers
are not willing to work
in the villages due to
those places
do not have the basic facilities and educational supplements as well as
family migartion
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