The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012.

The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012.
The given table provides some information on the
amount
of electricity generated by five
sources
including Geothermal,
Wind
, Solar, Hydraulic and
Bio-mass
across the globe over a four-year
period
. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is apparent that the Hydraulic source generated the highest
amount
of energy among the other
sources
, which accounted for more than 80% of the total energy production.
Moreover
, all
sources
witnessed an upward trend throughout the given
period
. In terms of evaluation of
sources
, the electricity produced by the Hydraulic method
,
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was thirteen times that
of
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generated by
Bio-mass
and
Wind
sources
.
In other words
, Hydraulic
sources
started at 3329
TWh
in 2009
and
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after which
this
amount
went up to 3514 and 3530 in 2010 and 2011, respectively.
At the end
of the studied
period
,
this
amount
peaked at 3663.
Although
both
Bio-mass
and
Wind
started the production of energy at a similar value at 246 and 276, the
wind
was a more fast-growing source so
this
source generated more than 535
TWH
in 2012 as opposed to the
Bio-mass
at 326
TWh
. Other
sources
,
such
as Geothermal and Solar, were ranked
the
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fourth and fifth. The generated
amount
of electricity by Geothermal had no significant change over the
period
, whilst the other one started at 21
TWh
and produced 104
TWh
in 2012.
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