The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows the proportion of
people
from four Asian countries living in cities between 1970 and 2020, with prognostication for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, it can be seen that the percentage of population
in four different countries increased over the period. The Indonesian Add an article
the population
people
were the lowest in 1970, however
, the proportion of the community from Malaysia will be the highest at the end
.
To begin
in 1970 percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
people
from Correct article usage
the Philippine
Philippine
and Malaysia Fix the agreement mistake
Philippines
were
approximately 30% and Correct subject-verb agreement
was
following
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in following
next
50 years Correct article usage
the next
Philippines
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Philippine
people
fluctuated with prediction
they Correct article usage
a prediction
will
be around 50% in 2040. Wrong verb form
would
While
, the proportion of the population from Malaysia just increased over the period and it will be more than 80% in 2040.
Furthermore
, Indonesian people
stood at around 12% at the beginning, which was 75% less than Thailand's community at the same time. The population of Indonesia significantly rose until 2020 and it will continue to increase in the next 20 years, which will be in the second place between the countries. Although
, the percentage of Thailand's Correct word choice
However
people
gradually increased in the next
following 50 years and it is forecasted to be the lowest in 2040.Correct word choice
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