Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

Academic learning is not only limited to formal delivery at school. Many parents choose the alternative, which is homeschooling their child

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certain advantages that it might contain. In my opinion, the benefits of homeschooling can not outweigh

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drawbacks that it might introduce. In order to fit into society, a student will need to learn basic social skills.

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approach is unable to provide

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kind of learning

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the nature of it that does not involve social interaction between students.

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, students that only learn in their

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will fail to understand their broader social context, making it difficult for them to interact with strangers. If

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traditional schooling is taken

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, they will develop social awareness and might even be motivated to contribute

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society. Social skills are

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part of learning and homeschooling might lack the ability to provide those. Homeschooling might

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not follow the standardized

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later on. One of the

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of a

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is to have uniform academic measurements across the country. An example

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is when a homeschooling program

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from the standard material, the students will face some difficulties when it comes to completing national tests which they might take during their life.

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, one could argue that national tests are irrelevant when you are homeschooled

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you will not have a good measurement to compare your academic skills. A

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is a great way to standardize teaching and academic measurements and not

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some negative implications on the student. In conclusion,

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parents might have their own reasons to homeschool their children, other factors should

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be considered. Social learning and

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compliance are what homeschooling could be lacking

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the full essence of a student's academic journey.