The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table provides information about
a
total number of Correct article usage
the
visitors
to Ashdown Museum during the year
before and the year
after refurbishment. The pie charts, on the other hand
, illustrate the results of surveys on satisfaction rates among visitors
during the same two periods.
Overall
, the number of visitors
rose significantly after refurbishment and the same can be seen for the satisfaction rate, where the majority of clients felt satisfied.
The year
after it was refurbished, the amount of comers rose from 74000 a year
to 92000.
Furthermore
, the same trend can be seen for
the charts, where the proportion of satisfied comers increased considerably from 45% to 75%. Change preposition
in
Nevertheless
, in the year
before the museum was refurbished, half of the visitors
were dissatisfied, whereas
the year
after refurbishment, the percentage of them dropped just over half from its initial proportion. However
, a tiny fraction of comers preferred to give no response and it stayed consistent.Submitted by dnm.best on
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