The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
The presented flow chart delineates how Stokeford Village changed over a period of 8 decades between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that the village of Stokeford witnessed a striking transformation. The most tangible change is the moderate increase in the figure for houses,
and the addition of multiple facilities.
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Initially
, as illustrated by the graph, the post office was positioned opposite the river and a primary school. After 80 years, both the office and the school remained stable. Next,
the most conspicuous modernization is that all farmland was demolished to make place for residents’ households. In addition
, many roads were constructed, and different houses were erected around these roads.
Another elements
to concern is that the bridge, which crosses the River Stoke, was still unchanged after eight decades. Replace the adjective
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Last
but not least, the area which included a large house and gardens was minimized. Furthermore
, the large house, which is located amidst the garden, was expanded to make a place for the retirement house.Submitted by quynhtranhbh on
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