The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
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The presented flow chart delineates how Stokeford Village changed over a period of 8 decades between 1930 and 2010.
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, it is evident that the village of Stokeford witnessed a striking transformation. The most tangible change is the moderate increase in the figure for houses
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and the addition of multiple facilities.
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, as illustrated by the graph, the post office was positioned opposite the river and a primary school. After 80 years, both the office and the school remained stable.
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the most conspicuous modernization is that all farmland was demolished to make place for residents’ households.
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, many roads were constructed, and different houses were erected around these roads. Another
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to concern is that the bridge, which crosses the River Stoke, was still unchanged after eight decades.
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but not least, the area which included a large house and gardens was minimized.
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, the large house, which is located amidst the garden, was expanded to make a place for the retirement house.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demolition
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • urbanization
  • land use
  • farmlands
  • notable buildings
  • layout
  • developments
  • economic growth
  • population growth
  • amenities
  • transformation
  • expansion
  • reconstruction
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