The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
The presented flow chart delineates how Stokeford Village changed over a period of 8 decades between 1930 and 2010.
Overall
, it is evident that the village of Stokeford witnessed a striking transformation. The most tangible change is the moderate increase in the figure for housesLinking Words
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and the addition of multiple facilities.
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Initially
, as illustrated by the graph, the post office was positioned opposite the river and a primary school. After 80 years, both the office and the school remained stable. Linking Words
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the most conspicuous modernization is that all farmland was demolished to make place for residents’ households. Linking Words
In addition
, many roads were constructed, and different houses were erected around these roads.
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to concern is that the bridge, which crosses the River Stoke, was still unchanged after eight decades. Replace the adjective
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but not least, the area which included a large house and gardens was minimized. Linking Words
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, the large house, which is located amidst the garden, was expanded to make a place for the retirement house.Linking Words
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