The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

The given line graph compares the global demand for four different types of textiles over a period of 35 years between 1980 and 2015. Unit are measured in millions

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

30 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Global demand
Textile industry
Natural fibers
Synthetic fibers
Manufacturing advancements
Fashion trends
Consumer preferences
Economic factors
Purchasing power
Eco-friendly materials
Market share
Production capacity
Polyester
Cotton
Wool
Nylon
Demand curve
Sustainability
Textile innovation
Fluctuations

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The line graph shows the global demand of different types of textile from 1980 to 2015.

Some people believe that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money should be invested better in other areas. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.