The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map compares the plans of one centre of the town of Islip
in
Change preposition
at
a
current moment and the plan with proposed changes for Correct article usage
the
future
.
Correct article usage
the future
Overall
, the area
is planning to be more developed including roads
construction and the expansion of house facilities. Change the noun form
road
Additionally
, because of the building of new facilities, the country side
is going to be removed.
Correct your spelling
countryside
To begin
, in the centre now, a number of shops are placed along the main road, whereas
in future, the shops on the north side will be replaced by a bus station, shopping centre and a car park. Additionally
, a new housing area
will be built from the east of the parking, having access to a pathway for pedastrians
.
Correct your spelling
pedestrians
Furthermore
, as a road is planned to surround the main facilities, countryside
, on the Correct article usage
the countryside
northen
side, will be erased. Even thoughCorrect your spelling
northern
north
,
a school and accommodation Remove the comma
apply
area
is considered to keep
unchanged, the housing Verb problem
remain
area
, which is next to a park will be divided into two areas.Submitted by innakireeva0101 on
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