The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map compares the plans of one centre of the town of Islip

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the

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current moment and the plan with proposed changes for

future

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Overall

, the

area

is planning to be more developed including

roads

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construction and the expansion of house facilities.

Additionally

, because of the building of new facilities, the

country side

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countryside

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is going to be removed.

To begin

, in the centre now, a number of shops are placed along the main road,

whereas

in future, the shops on the north side will be replaced by a bus station, shopping centre and a car park.

Additionally

, a new housing

area

will be built from the east of the parking, having access to a pathway for

pedastrians

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pedestrians

Furthermore

, as a road is planned to surround the main facilities,

countryside

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the countryside

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, on the

northen

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northern

north

side, will be erased. Even though

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a school and accommodation

area

is considered to

keep

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remain

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unchanged, the housing

area

, which is next to a park will be divided into two areas.

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