Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your best friend who is a musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.
Dear Rahul,
Hi, Hope you are well. The reason to write you is to let you know that my sister is
finally
getting married. And, I want you to perform on the night of marriage, please don't say no!
I wanted to check your availability for the last
weekend of next month. I'll be really excited to see you perform after a very long time if you are able to come. I believe you'll come with all the instruments but let me know if you need anything else.
It is a destination wedding in Cuba. Therefore
, we are not planning to book a whole band. As,
we need to stay within the budget and follow the security measures of the resort.
You'll be able to make a lot of connections for your future opportunities as there are multiple engaged couples coming on a special day. Please let me know about the compensation you might want to receive, I will make sure to get that sorted way in advance.
Write back as soon as possible!
Take care,
JalpaRemove the comma
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea for improved clarity and cohesion. While this letter is reasonably structured, a more deliberate organization with clear topic sentences in each paragraph can enhance readability.
Task Achievement
The letter fulfills the task requirements but could provide more detailed information regarding the event and your friend's suitability. Elaborate on how your friend's style or experience with music makes them especially qualified for a wedding atmosphere.
Task Achievement
Maintain a polite and warm tone throughout, keeping it consistent with the nature of the request. While your tone is generally suitable, ensure that the importance of the event is conveyed with the respect and excitement it deserves.