Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work for helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter: - Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital - say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do - give details of when you would be availble for this work. Write at least 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you with
regards
to unpaid work at your hospital after seeing your advertisement for unpaid work.
I have just Fix the agreement mistake
regard
been
retired recently, and I would like to do some work at the hospital as I want to help Unnecessary verb
apply
people
. Firstly
, I have plenty of free time now and I thought it would be great if I could help you with my knowledge after serving 30 years at the Health Centre in the city centre. Secondly
, helping people
makes me happy.
I can quarantee
you that I can help transportation of sick Correct your spelling
guarantee
people
and cleaning
the garden where front of the hospital's entrance. I had transported Wrong verb form
clean
people
from their home
to Fix the agreement mistake
homes
hospital
on two Fix the agreement mistake
hospitals
way
for almost 10 years. Fix the agreement mistake
ways
In addition
, I have a great deal of experience of how to cut grass and water plants.
I will be free after next week from Monday to Tuesday from 10 am to 3 pm. I am not able to be free at the weekends since I need to look after my house neither pucblic
holidays.
I look forward to hearing from you if my application Correct your spelling
public
go
through.
Yours faithfully,
Atilla ZeChange the verb form
goes
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coherence cohesion
Please ensure each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea. The logical structuring will improve by using transition words and clear topic sentences.
task achievement
It is important to expand on your reasons for wanting to do unpaid work and how your skills directly relate to the needs of the hospital. This will enhance the completeness of the response.
coherence cohesion
Check for mild grammatical errors which can detract from the clarity of your message.
task achievement
Consider providing more specific details about your availability, such as the possible duration of your commitment.
task achievement
Maintain a respectful and formal tone throughout the letter, which you have done adequately, but also ensure professionalism in discussing your skillset and experience.