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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The table illustrates the total amount of
people
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 who
traveled
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travelled
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 abroad from five areas (Africa, America, Europe,
Middle
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the Middle
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 East,
Asian
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Asia
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 and the Pacific) in four different years (1990, 1995, 2000, and 2005). The data is presented in millions. In general, four areas had a gradual increase from 1990 to 2005,
while
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 the other one had a slight decrease in 2005. The most areas which had a significant increase
was
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 Asia and the Pacific. From 1990 to 2005, Asia and the Pacific had a dramatic increase of more than 100% with a total
people
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 of 135.8
million
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.
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, Europe had the highest amount of
people
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 who went abroad
in
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apply
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all year, from 280.2
million
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 in 1990 to 400.2
million
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 in 2005.
In contrast
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, America slightly decreased during five years, from 117.4
million
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people
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 in 2000 to 113.5
million
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 in 2005. The rest,
Middle
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the Middle
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 East and Africa, grew a little to around 10
million
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 during 15 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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